It's alright, but has BIG flaws
It was CORNY.
WTFWTFWTF!
Alright, I've got that over...
I suppose the initial "That dream was too real," and then them all going to the library was kinda of a product of laziness, but it ozzed CHEESINESS.
Then the fight scene, "What do we do?" "Fight." thing was just a feeble attempt to be cool, as was the fight scene ("Look!")
All this, and then I look at your profile... You are 15! 15 for god's sake.
Grow up.
And I'm eleven, by the way.